实例讲解托福独立写作让步段的写作技巧（实用4篇）
实例讲解托福独立写作让步段的写作技巧（1）
托福综合写作开头方法一、比较新颖、有创意的开头
“As technologies and the demand for certain services change， many workers will lose their The responsibility for those people to adjust to such change should belong to the individual worker， not to government or to
As a saying goes， “God helps those help themselves”， which is true in most But as far as the large numbers of laid-off workers caused by the technological and market changes are concerned， I believe the government and the business certainly have an unshakable responsibility to
托福综合写作开头方法二、 可以适当的复述一下题目，然后稍作让步，再表达自己的观点和立场
“Work greatly influences people’s personal lives—their special interests， their leisure activities， even their appearance way from the work ”
The speaker claims that our jobs greatly influence our personal interests， recreational activities and even While I agree that the personal lives of some people are largely determined by their work， in my view it would be a mistake to draw this conclusion In my observation， the extent to which occupation influences personal life depends on the nature of the work， and how central the work is to one’s sense of
“We shape our buildings and afterwards our buildings shape ”
I believe this statement should be interpreted broadly—to mean that we are influenced by the exterior shape of buildings， as well as by the arrangement of multiple buildings and by a building’s various architectural and aesthetic While I doubt that buildings determine our character or basic personality traits， I agree that they can greatly influence our attitudes， moods， and even life
托福综合写作开头方法三、新托福写作可以以提问方式开头，阐述自己的观点，再表明自己的立场
“As technologies and the demand for certain services change， many workers will lose their The responsibility for those people to adjust to such change should belong to the individual worker， not to government or to ”
As technology and changing social needs render more and more jobs obsolete， who is responsible for helping displaced workers adjustWhile individuals have primary responsibility for learning new skills and finding work， both industry and government have some obligation to provide them the means of doing
托福综合写作开头方法四、可以先表明自己的立场，再阐述原因
Businesses are as likely as are governments to establish large bureaucracies， but bureaucracy is far more damaging to a business than it is to a
Contrary to the statement’s premise， my view is that businesses are less likely than government to establish large bureaucracies， because businesses know that they are more vulnerable than government to damage resulting from bureaucratic My position is well supported by common sense and by
实例讲解托福独立写作让步段的写作技巧（2）
托福写作题目：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The food we eat today is much healthier than in the (我们现在吃的食物比过去更健康。)
托福写作范文：
Back in the days, the world suffered from instances of food-related issues such as shortage, sanitation, and nutritional Today, with the numerous advances in related fields of technology, most if not all, of these problems are just a memory of the Many claim, in particular, that the foods we consume today are of a much higher quality, thereby making them healthier to But is this certainly the case? I don’t think
The last time I checked, there were lots of fast food chains sprawling in our cities and even in some suburban In these places are common sights of obese children and other unhealthy-looking It does not stop The situation gets Remember the time that the price of staple food like rice was sky-high because of limited supply? Well, that’s not the case However, there were news reports showing that most of these food supplies, though plentiful, lack the necessary nutritional Certain varieties were even proven to be harmful Does the term Genetically Modified Organisms (GMO) ring a bell?听起来熟悉吗 In spite of our efforts to produce agricultural products with higher yield, the main concern seems to be Are we really eating healthier food now?
Food fuels 食物给我们力量(加油fuel) Depending on the quality of food we eat, our resistance to sickness, fatigue, and overall wellbeing is Then how come most people now easily get sick or die early? Yes, there are other factors to consider like air pollution and the However, food forms the large proportion of our requirements for survival and daily accomplishment of our
This being said, I firmly conclude that the foods we eat today are not as healthy compared to those in the Despite the advances of modern technology, certain by-products are Thus, it is up to us to effectively filter what goes into our mouths lest以免 we suffer from unhealthy foods’
实例讲解托福独立写作让步段的写作方法相关
实例讲解托福独立写作让步段的写作技巧（3）
托福综合写作开头方法一、比较新颖、有创意的开头
“As technologies and the demand for certain services change， many workers will lose their The responsibility for those people to adjust to such change should belong to the individual worker， not to government or to
As a saying goes， “God helps those help themselves”， which is true in most But as far as the large numbers of laid-off workers caused by the technological and market changes are concerned， I believe the government and the business certainly have an unshakable responsibility to
托福综合写作开头方法二、 可以适当的复述一下题目，然后稍作让步，再表达自己的观点和立场
“Work greatly influences people’s personal lives—their special interests， their leisure activities， even their appearance way from the work ”
The speaker claims that our jobs greatly influence our personal interests， recreational activities and even While I agree that the personal lives of some people are largely determined by their work， in my view it would be a mistake to draw this conclusion In my observation， the extent to which occupation influences personal life depends on the nature of the work， and how central the work is to one’s sense of
“We shape our buildings and afterwards our buildings shape ”
I believe this statement should be interpreted broadly—to mean that we are influenced by the exterior shape of buildings， as well as by the arrangement of multiple buildings and by a building’s various architectural and aesthetic While I doubt that buildings determine our character or basic personality traits， I agree that they can greatly influence our attitudes， moods， and even life
托福综合写作开头方法三、新托福写作可以以提问方式开头，阐述自己的观点，再表明自己的立场
“As technologies and the demand for certain services change， many workers will lose their The responsibility for those people to adjust to such change should belong to the individual worker， not to government or to ”
As technology and changing social needs render more and more jobs obsolete， who is responsible for helping displaced workers adjustWhile individuals have primary responsibility for learning new skills and finding work， both industry and government have some obligation to provide them the means of doing
托福综合写作开头方法四、可以先表明自己的立场，再阐述原因
Businesses are as likely as are governments to establish large bureaucracies， but bureaucracy is far more damaging to a business than it is to a
Contrary to the statement’s premise， my view is that businesses are less likely than government to establish large bureaucracies， because businesses know that they are more vulnerable than government to damage resulting from bureaucratic My position is well supported by common sense and by
实例讲解托福独立写作让步段的写作技巧（4）
许多考生在参加托福写作考试时总喜欢将自己觉得最复杂的句式表现出来，觉得从句用的越多越好，对于这点，专家认为是不对的，托福写作一定要简洁!
所谓“言简朴实原则”，就是行文不啰嗦，句子应越短越好，如果一个字能说清楚的，就不要用两个字。
例如：At this point in time，we should pull together for our (现在我们应该为我们的目标团结一致)这句话中“At this point in time”表示“现在”，我们完全可以用now来代替。
In the majority of cases，he likes to ride bike to the (他通常喜欢骑单车到办公室)。很简单的一句话，完全可以写成 He usually likes to ride bike to the office。
平时我们所说的用词多样化和地道并不是体现在这些时间副词或者是完全可以简化的啰嗦句型上，而是指实用性极强的词如动词和形容词，比如：
Original：Solving trivial problems in the dorm will add your social experience and help you to understand other people‘s feelings and learn to be kind。
Revised： Solving trivial problems in the dorm will enrich your social experience and help you to understand other people’s feelings and learn to be considerate。
add，kind 表达的含义都比较宽泛。 add可以指数量上的增加，也可以指程度的加强，对于“丰富经验、增加知识”这个意思，用enrich会使表达更准确。 kind 从字面意义上讲是“好的、善良的”，用kind来形容人无法具体地表现出一个人的性格特征到底怎样，原句中是想表达“考虑周到、体贴入微”的特点，要准确表达这个含义应选择considerate。
另外，我们常见的一些累赘用词表现在托福写作中句意的理解，比如：He has had many years of (actual) experience in business。(他有多年经商的经验)actual是多余的，因为experience已经有actual的意味了。
We assembled(together) all the parts for our (我们装好收音机的零件)assemble本身就有together的意思，因此together是多余的。“平等相处原则”的意思是行文不出现明显的带歧视或偏见的字眼，包括男女性别，也要避免区别，以示“平等”。例如：
Many businessmen(businesswomen) feel their jobs are very (许多商人觉得工作压力很大) 这句话写 businessmen或是businesswomen都是不妥当的，可以改为 business people或 business executives或business managers就可以包括男女了。
当然，一些带有种族偏见的字眼，甚至有侮辱的味道(insulting words 或 slur)，也要尽量避免使用，以免闹出麻烦。例如：
对黑人不要用 Negro，更不能用Nigger (用 Black 还可以)，礼貌的说法 是Afro-American 或African-American;对白人不要用 Honky (这是黑人骂白人的用字)，正确用法是 Caucasian，或 white people;对犹太人不要用 Hymies，应该叫Jewish 或 Jewishpeople;对越南人不要用 Gook，要用 Vietnamese;至于墨西哥人、西班牙人及中、南美洲人，包括 Puerto Rico，正确的用法多是Hispanics 或 Latins，不过据说西班牙人为了维护自己的文化，倒喜欢别人称为 Spaniard。
